Auto Show Poster

This is the half size marker comp for my "ride" poster.  The mountains did not come out as nice as I would've liked them too, and don't even get me started on the car.  I can't draw a car to save my life!  It was suggested to me during review of these comps that the "Classic Auto Show" text be bannered across the top, and the date and location remain where they are.  I thought it was a pretty good suggestion, but the person going over my original should've suggested it, or picked another poster with that idea.  This was the only problem I had with this particular poster, the wide open space up in the top left corner.  I will be playing around with this when I am working up the final design on the computer.  

The final poster will probably have the car a little higher, the mountains will be slightly higher too as well as filled in more.  the mountains look really good close up, the marker made an interesting texture.  I would like to see this texture larger, so people far away can see it better.  I will either blow this drawing up or perhaps play around with watercolors and then scan those images in.  And as much as I would like to change the text, i really can't do much.  I will make up a copy of what the poster would look like if the auto show text were to be placed on the top; but i think i will be making enough slight moderations, that the empty space up top will disappear.